The desert at night
is vibrant
with seething, shifting hotbeds of sand
The highway is a green-eyed panther
stalking the night
A mirage ahead
Cradles the schoolyard by Main Street
A hair bow crushed into the earth
The thirsty earth that
Swallows weary souls
The city far from the desert
Where the drive at night
Coalesces into capture and prey
Where hunting animals
Are the night force
The desert into which we flee
Night flying before us
The places we go, the places we’ve been
The pulling of unseen forces
The heat wrapping us into it all
Cosmic and spell-binding
Wonderfully written
Thank you so much!
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Wow!
Thanks Jennie!
You’re welcome!
“The highway is a green-eyed panther” is a very apt metaphor for distant headlights sidling toward you, how different nighttime driving is from daytime driving! I like this as a description of life, looking back and reflecting: “The places we go, the places we’ve been / The pulling of unseen forces / The heat wrapping us into it all / Cosmic and spell-binding” Well done, Lana. Glad to see you back. 🙂
Thank you so much, Joan. I’m still trying to reconcile my work life with my writing life. I’m not quite there yet, but I get really sad when I’m unable to write or read blogs. I always feel I’m missing something….which I am, LOL.
Atmospheric – I love a journey poem! My favourite is Wichita Vortex Sutra by Alan Ginsberg – long, but really ‘travels’!
Hi Dave, thanks for coming along a journey through the desert at night! Ginsberg is truly amazing!
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Loved this Lana. I felt like I was reading a Hunter Thompson journey 🙂
What a wonderful comment, Debby. Thank you. Happy Holidays my friend!
Just sayin’ Lana. Happy holidays to you and thanks! 🙂
Beautiful! And with it being quite cold around here, the heat of the desert seems somewhat desirable! 😁
Happy Holidays, Lana! Hope all is well with you. ❤
Some desert heat does sound good about this time every year, LOL. I also hope you have a wonderful and creative new year my friend. Much love to you, xoxo
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Happy New Year to you!!
Hello l. T garvin. I am the producer of funky news – news for kids. I heard about your amazing poetry and I had to see it. Your poems are great. I write some poetry myself. Anyway can you go to my website on comments and please write a kid – friendly poem. You are very inspiring and I will love for my young readers to see that too. All the best….MIDNIGHTLION
I would be very honored to do so. I am also a children’s author and have published two kid’s books and have one in progress. Thank you for the invite!
Your welcome😊😊
I am sooo honoured right now!!! 😊😊😊
Thank you so much. 💕💕💕💕
I love your poetry😍😍😍
Thank you so much!
Your welcome can you please go to my website and write me a inspirational, kid friendly poem
I will be happy to do so. Thank you!
Thx
Thank you for being an amazing role-model to all poets and authors😊😊
Please reply soon❤️❤️
You are now officially my fav person on wordpress
Well I’m honored again, haha!
Thanks🤗you made me soooo happy. 😁😀
cool
Thank you so much!