The day the sinkhole gave way
it was partly cloudy with 73% humidity
it formed on the asphalt
at the mouth of the alley
where the prickly cactus
was promising peek-a-boo yellow blooms
and who knew, right?
The bottom fell out in fathomless delight!
we jumped in anyway
and landed in China
It worked well
we always said we’d dig there
A free trip!
I thought it would end in a desert
not a bamboo forest
not clothed in red holiday fashion
for the New Year and hung bao
we tried writing your name in that elaborate maze of characters
distracted, you leaned more towards the idea of mooncakes and dragons
while I wondered how we would get back
After all, nobody ever heard of digging to America
or maybe they did
but here we were atop the Great Wall
our feet flying in the atmosphere of a new day
marveling at time, distance and assorted greenery
pondering where else
a tunnel could lead
deep through
the spinning earth
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Oh, my! I had not thought of digging to China in years. What a lovely poem as sink holes have become realities. Never have I seen one put to poetry. Well done.
Thanks Jo. There was that time when kids tried to dig there, haha! π
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Thanks, John!
You are very graciously welcome oh Lana.
Love it! We too wanted to dig to China when we were kids – but upwards from Australia. π
Thanks Linda, those were surely the days, haha!
Love your adventurous spirit, jumping right into that sinkhole. Even though the whole event is fathomless, we look for reasons… temp, humidity, location, some relation to the cactus blooms. We tried to dig our way to China as kids and yet, we’re surprised when that’s where the sinkhole takes us. Your descriptions were lovely, and almost enough to distract me from the worry of how we would get back home. π
Those sinkholes, Joan. Who knew you could really make it to China, haha! Still working to figure out a way home. Thanks so much! π
‘There’s a hole in my heart that goes all the way to China….’ came to mind. Great poem, Lana- love the magical realism and absurdity.
Hi Mek! Nice to see you here. Thanks so much for the delightful compliment!
Thanks Lana, and you are most welcome π
Great imagination Lana. Loved it! π
Thanks my friend!
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