The landscape
has turned into a carpet of crows,
winter desperate.
Then, there are your eyes.
Obsidian, but bright,
gleaming like a cotton field in the night.
as bereft as any corn farmer sowing drought.
The eyes scan the banks of a river
that is jumbled with the verdancy
of jungle plants
green enough to stir the memory
of once ripe fields.
Eyes like carbon
stare and see beyond
a velvet-lined box
kissing the notes of sorrow
last sealed upon your lips.
Your first two lines caught my eye and imagination…
Thank you so much!
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Imagery is vivid, as befitting a poem about eyes – the windows to the soul, they say …
Thanks Dave! I’ve heard that about the eyes…