She walks in beauty
or rather
she once ran
through the scorching farm fields
heavy with crops
Look at me,
she would say
swarthy, twiglike, silky hair
her brain lit
with chemical combustion
She rescued him
in the desert
poured drinks of rainwater
plied his truths
with drunken lips and lies
He ran blindly
haunted by her aura
incited by her call
but beauty’s path is fickle
she landed full circle
in arid terrain
enveloped with rocks and cacti
He with his tools of the trade,
and sand shovel
never uncovered
her whispered magic
her beautiful dreams
[…] via Sand Song of the Siren — L.T. Garvin […]
Beautiful words
Thank you so much 😀
Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
Thanks John. Have a wonderful weekend. 😀
You are very graciously welcome. Have an exceptional weekend.
This line — “beauty’s path is fickle” — I love!
Thanks Debbie!
I love the futuristic, fantasy feel of this. Plied with drinks of rainwater. The tools of his trade, a sand shovel. Tidbits that let us imagine the REST of the story. I especially liked “her brain lit / with chemical combustion” which is what feels like is going on in my head when my writing is hot, coming full force from a really deep inner place. 🙂
Thanks so much, Joan! I love the days when writing is hot and coming full force which is become more and more rare for me, lol! Happy writing, my friend! 😀
Beautiful, intriguing and wonderfully futuristic! Love it, Lana! 😄
Thanks Sarah! 😀
A lovely, creative piece of writing. Beautiful and evocative, Lana. 🙂
Thanks so much, Iris. I hope you have a lovely weekend! Happy writing my friend 😀
Beautiful poem. Lana. You evoke such longing with many of your poems. Emotionally sublime images. 🙂
Thanks so much, Diana. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Happy writing, my friend!
Beautiful, I love this! Got all the right brain gears clicking and whirring (gears whir don’t they?)
My brain liked it muchly. 🌺🌺
Such evocative imagery
Thank you so much!
My pleasure. Look forward to reading more 🌺🌺
Exquisite writing, Lana with such a deep emotional impact…surreal feel throughout, untangible, magical and deeply moving. ❤️
Thanks so much, Annika! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 😀
I love the imagery you evoke with your stories Lana. 🙂
Thank yo so much, Debby! 😀
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