The earth here
redeems itself in spring
stills itself
gazing graciously upon
the flight of cranes.
These lakes
now utterly thankful
sipping their own water
at high tea.
Open fields
thrust out
their green grassy arms
at the feet of rain
brimming with
ebullient life.
Not so rustic,
alas,
we deal with
incertitude
our seasons static.
Thunder plays her tambourine
as the woodwinds
hold cautious interludes
their breath as gigantic
as Big Bend
extending a carpet of oxygen
pumping the heartbeats
of giant earth.
Right, like at least they could say thank you!
Yes indeed!
Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
Thanks John!
You are very graciously welcome.
Powerful poem, Lana. I love the line: “Thunder plays her tambourine / as the woodwinds / hold cautious interludes.”
Oh, that’s wonderful. π
Thank you so much, Diana π
I love the lakes “sipping their own water / at high tea.” Also the word “ebullient” which is so perfect as you’ve used it there. Nature somehow manages to flourish in the midst of uncertainty, a worthwhile lesson for all of us. Well done, Lana! π
Thanks, Joan. I wrote this for Earth Day, but never had time to post it. I speak of the lakes in such a manner because we had a drought for five years and our lakes were almost completely dry! So that is where the line about them sipping their own water came from. We were lucky that we didn’t run out of water, it was so close. I wish people would wake up to so many things impacting our planet.
Good use of personification here, the effect quite Wordsworthian!
Thank you so much, Dave!
“the lakes sipping their own water at high tea,” – I love that. And I love the word “ebullient,” at which you are describing how the lakes and everything nature are brimming with laughter, full of life that the rain has finally arrived. You wrote it beautifully in order. A very strong poem! Well done Lana! Have a wonderful Sunday!
Thanks you, Juli. Glad to hear you enjoyed it. I ventured to the big city to see my daughters this weekend so I’m really enjoying that. I hope you have a wonderful Sunday too! π
Have a wonderful mum and daughters’ time. read from you soon! Take care now!
So powerful and strong! Every new line seems to knock the air out of me! Just like nature always does with all its grandeur π
Hope you had a lovely time with your daughters, Lana! xxxxxxxx
Thanks, Sarah. We really do have a beautiful planet, I wish world leaders were more inclined to help care for it.
Me too! Maybe someday… π
Sad that so many are cavalier about this beautiful planet we call home, huh, Linda? I’ve been watching the wildfires out west and praying for all those affected.
Oh yes, Debbie, they surely are. This planet is such a gift, I surely wish people (especially world leaders) were more inclined to help care for it!
Awsm post
Thank you
Powerful writing, powerful earth.Just beautiful Lana. π x
Thanks so much, Debby!
Welcome Lana. π
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