The sky is on fire
ruby red sunset
streaked with desire
as if painted fish
swim the the mountains
A path spilling from the hills
brimming fiery, red clay
its flame builds in dusk
Ah, divide the world
into sunsets
Here the village sits
a map point
in jungle dense
magnificent
On the edge
of unresolved dreams
this sultry peace
crowded with lush
competitors
At the intersection of
secluded moments
peacocks
shrill in their strut
vault of heaven
inside their plumage
await Hera’s chariot
Dedicated to my wonderful artist friends: ย The Contented Crafter and Miss Gentileschi, Art Expedition
Image courtesy of Wikiart.org
This is beautiful LT!
Thanks so much, Holly!
Gosh – well done! You’ve taken a painting and turned it into a poem…….. <3
Thanks, Pauline! I actually dedicated this poem to you and another of my artist blogging friends. I had forgotten to list that, but I went back and added it. I adore artists, you guys bring so much color and beauty into a sometimes dreary world. Thank you for that! xoxo
I am immensely touched! That is so sweet – and me in the same blog post that features a Gauguin ๐ If only! I look at his use of colour and form and it blows my mind!! Thank you, xoxo
You are very welcome, Pauline. It is truly amazing work, I never knew much about him until I saw that painting several weeks ago. I just love it. I am so glad that we have the Arts especially during these troubling times that we must live in. Creative people are a gift to the world. xo
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Thanks John!
You are very graciously welcome.
Beautiful, Lana. I had to look up the painting after reading and read again. Poem and image are vibrant. You capture the richness of color wonderfully. <3
Thank you, Diana. Isn’t that a wonderful painting? I saw it for the first time a few days ago and it has stayed in my mind ever since.
Lana, you’ve painted a painting with words — very impressive, my friend!
Thanks so much, Debbie! Art is a glorious thing ๐
Inspiring poem… great piece of art. Wonderful thoughts for your friends, Lana!
Thank you, Iris. I really like that painting since I discovered only a few weeks ago. Artists everywhere are such a great inspiration especially during these dismal and sometimes scary days. xo
They are, and their art should be appreciated… my pleasure, Lana. Much love.
Much love back to you, Iris ๐ xo
Your sultry words match perfectly with the color and feel of the painting, Lana. I love the way you refer to each day as a new and separate thing… “Ah, divide the world / into sunsets” and describe the peacocks as “shrill in their strut.” Art makes for great inspiration. ๐
Thank you, Joan. Art does indeed make for some great inspiration. I didn’t always know about this painting, I saw it on Instagram a few weeks back and keep thinking how beautiful it is. You always wonder what was in the mind of the artist whenever they painted a piece. ๐
Oh, Lana! This is sooo beautiful! Your words rival Gauguinยดs painting in every sense – I even think that if I havenยดt known the painting before, your words would have painted it for me right before my eyes! The colors shine through every word, the forms manifest themselves like by magic – youยดre not only an extraordinary writer and poetess – you are a magician as well!
And to dedicate it to me and your other artist friend is such a beautiful gift. Thank you very much, dear Lana, you really honor me with your friendship and inspiration! I will print this out and hang above my desk! Much, much love to you! xxxxxxx
You are very welcome, Sarah, and thank you for your very kind words. I just love that painting, and only recently became familiar with it. The Arts are so important, maybe even more so now as a way to “escape” and refresh our spirits during these turbulent times that we live in. Artists, painters, sculptors, crafters, all very special people in my book. Much love to you, also. xoxo
Itยดs a phenomenal painting! I love it too! All the warm colors, the several layers that seem to suck you into the painting deeper and deeper… he was a brilliant artist.
I agree with you on the importance of the arts and their role in escaping for a little while at least the hardships of life. But you forgot one very important group or artists in your list: writers!!! ๐ For me actually even more important than painters or musicians, although the last two mean the world to me ๐ Maybe because words are able to carry us into different worlds throughout a longer period of time and meaning than simple pictures, they linger so powerfully in our minds, at least in mine ๐
Have a very beautiful day, Lana, with lots of sunshine and creativity! Much love! xxxxxx
You are so correct, Sarah. I think we are all a pretty good group, ha ha. We make the world better through visual arts, paintings, crafting, books, movies, poetry, oh and yes, music, music, music! Have a lovely, creative, sunshine day also! ๐
We definitely rock! ๐ Best band ever!!! ๐
xxxxxx
I love this, both the poetry and the art. How nice that you dedicated it to Sarah! ๐
Thank you so much, Jennie. Sarah is such a jewel! I hope you have a wonderful and successful new school year. ๐
You are welcome! Best to you. ๐
A beautiful dedication, Lana…painting vibrantly with words, bringing the image alive! ๐โค๏ธ
Thanks Annika!