Tonight I leave the dead to sleep
as their faint beckonings
resonate and swirl
and sift among
the moss-draped trees
down this path
I travel long beyond
a corridor of
shallow fields
and through the murk
of unknown grief
The deep angst of the marsh
a fog of silky spider webs
the contours of it all
lighted by
the luminous face of the moon
half-hidden, half pretending
pulling me into
the splendid spinning
convex of time
Count the steps
on hallowed ground
take up the chisel
carve into stone
your finest salute
to the folded years
and to tragic mystery
whispered here
Spooky!
Just a bit, Marissa π
Hauntingly beautiful, Lana. On some level I resonated with it… (Oh, and I love that song.)
Thanks, Betty. And that surely is a good song π
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Thanks, John!
You are very graciously welcome.
I love how you match pictures and songs, using your own poetry to tie them together. I can almost see spirits resonating and swirling and sifting, such great words for what they do and how they move. Also love your descriptions of grief: long, shallow and deep, a murky, marshy, foggy, silky, half-lit, unknown place. “Take up the chisel / carve into stone / your finest salute / to the folded years” reminded me of the memento gift I got when I retired–complete with an engraved plaque, all the nicest things they could say about me, and my dates of service. π
Thanks, Joan. There is always an unknown marsh out there to plow through. Sometimes I think these years fold up rather fast. I know they had a lot of wonderful things about you to put on that plaque. Have a lovely week π
Beautiful and haunting, Lana. I love the line: “pulling me into/ the splendid spinning/ convex of time”
Wonderful poetry.
Thanks, so much Diana. In addition to observing precaution in basements, now there is great care to be taken plowing through an unknown marsh in the dark π
Ha ha. Yes! But all stuff of great storytelling π
Splendidly gothic imagery … their faint beckonings … eerie!
Hello, Dave and thank you! I would definitely advise avoiding anybody who is beckoning in the dark π
Advice I would have no problem taking! π
An evocative poem. Poignantly written, Lana!
Thanks Iris!
You’re welcome, Lana π
Haunting and mysterious. I’d expect nothing less from you talented Lana. <3
Thanks so much, Debby. Your wonderful comments always make my days so much better!
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Mysterious and beautiful, Lana! I’m always at awe how your words paint these intricate images in my head! Much love! xoxo πβ€
Thanks, Sarah! I am in love with the South. And what is better than a dark, gothic, sultry southern night? π
Very scary Lana, I loved the poem but I hate spider webs, I would have scream!
Spider webs are pretty scary, Juli, LOL