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Invisible Girl – Miracle Challenge

Published by broussardlana on July 14, 2016

Having lost myself between the pages of this book.
I dissolve as if sprinkled by invisibility perfume.
Into thin air, utopia finds me mellow.
I became the perfect autumn day, windswept with leaves and promise.
If only the creep across the way would stop gawking.

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  6. Miracle :) Miracle :)

    Hey Lana !
    This a beautiful poem using the prompt image. Like it’s said, the last line of the poem is very important. Likewise, everything got changed in your last line. It was unexpected surprise element.
    I enjoyed your poem.
    Congrats for completing challenge no. 5 👏😃👏😃👏😃
    🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆

    # July 14, 2016
  9. Miracle :) Miracle :)

    Reblogged this on miraclegirlblog and commented:
    Hello Everyone !
    Check out the latest post for ‘Weekly Writing #MiracleChallenge’ Week – 5 : https://miraclegirlblog.wordpress.com/2016/07/12/miraclechallenge-week-5-dated-12th-july-2016/
    Blogger : L.T.Garvin
    Tale Title : Invisible Girl
    Challenge No : 5
    Challenge : Write a Tiny Tale / Poem using prompt image in 5 or less sentences(for tale) and 5 or less lines(for poem)
    For those who are new to #MiracleChallenge, every Tuesday morning, I post new Writing prompts for 5 challenges to write Short Story / Tiny Tale/ Poem / Haiku.
    Visit my blog or and know the latest writing prompts and the rules to participate in #MiracleChallenge for the week dated from 12th to 18th july, 2016. Yes ! 18th July is the deadline.
    Kindly, everyone read and inspire each other to write.
    Happy Blogging !
    Enjoy and have fun:)
    From,
    Miracle:)

    # July 14, 2016
  10. sanberdooboy sanberdooboy

    i could relate the to the description of how a book can transport one to a wonderful place. then at the last line when reality intrudes in the form of a “creep” i laughed because it made me remember how frustrating life can be.

    # July 14, 2016
  12. reocochran reocochran

    I like how you snuck up on us with a serious jolt, Lana. It was like an amusement ride: quick and exciting!

    # July 15, 2016
  13. Bernadette Bernadette

    A really nice piece of writing. The interpretation of becoming lost in a book and then the annoyance of real life intruding – great!

    # July 17, 2016
    • L. T. Garvin, Author L. T. Garvin, Author

      Thank you. These writing prompts are a lot of fun, and sometimes, a bit unexpected. I thought this was an interesting photo. Thanks for stopping by and following my blog!

      # July 17, 2016
  16. Jocelyn Jocelyn

    I like how you wrote this-the description of reading is beautiful, and I like the turn in the last line-it made me laugh.

    # July 19, 2016
  17. Arati Arati

    I love it. The last line came out of left field and required a re-read to make sure I was still in the same zone. I think the image in the photograph is a fabulous. I love the playfulness I see in it as it brings your words into a tangible 3 dimensional form.

    # July 23, 2016
  18. Alan J. Blaustein Alan J. Blaustein

    I enjoyed this. I read through twice to see if there was any indication of that sucker punch last-line, but no indication until after it hit.
    Thank you for liking my post!

    # July 23, 2016

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