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Published by broussardlana on July 15, 2016

This perfection
found in a grasped hour
in those impromptu, unshattered moments
as time collides with harmony.
And when I look
will I find you in those seconds
in that epoch-honored peace
that is quietly bestowed
through the spirit of nature
from the grace of the Divine
in a place where
minutes fall away
like sprinkles from the hours
and there is simply us
in fragile bliss
a microcosm
caught in the caption of photos
filed in the book of memory.
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  2. Annika Perry Annika Perry

    Beautiful Lana, as delicate as time and memories themselves. Lovely, thoughtful and peaceful post. Wishing you a special weekend. 😀

    # July 15, 2016
  5. milliethom milliethom

    A lovely piece, with so many wonderful images. The one that jumped out at me was that of minutes falling away like sprinkles from the hours. Simply beautiful L.T.

    # July 15, 2016
      • milliethom milliethom

        You’re welcome L.T. We haven’t had chance to chat for months . My fault entirely, as I’ve been totally neglecting my blog. Hopefully, now my book of flash fic pieces is finished and I just have my trilogy to complete, I’ll have a little more time. Hope all is well – and I love the look of your new book. 🙂

        # July 18, 2016
        • L. T. Garvin, Author L. T. Garvin, Author

          Thanks Millie. I knew that you have been busy writing. I have also considered not blogging due to time constraints, it is so difficult to fit everything in. The only thing is everyone expects authors to maintain a blog. Between blogging, and all the other administrative tasks in being a writer, when do they actually expect us to write our stories? Glad to hear you got some work finished. I do have two children’s books that should be out in a few weeks. I was excited but now I’m just discouraged as far as launches, publicity, etc. I hope all is well with you also!

          # July 19, 2016
  9. sanberdooboy sanberdooboy

    this poem creates such a lovely mood that it is hard to leave it. perfect title. my favorite line: “as time collides with harmony.”

    # July 20, 2016
  10. Arati Arati

    “… in those impromptu, unshattered moments
    as time collides with harmony…”
    Exquisite. Sometimes this is exactly how I experience time. Thank you for giving giving words to my experience.

    # July 21, 2016
    • L. T. Garvin, Author L. T. Garvin, Author

      Thank you for the gracious compliment. There are many moments in time that we hold dear. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

      # July 21, 2016

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